Wafting by 
            my dreams 
Fly haphazard 
            in the breeze 
Just beyond 
            reach. 
Stealthily, I 
            stalk and pounce 
Yet just between 
            my fingers 
They fly 
            a circuitous course 
Eluding me. 
            those I have 
Caught and pinned 
            stare frozen 
Trophies on my wall 
            the mystery 
Elegance, beauty            
            gone.  
  
here is, a melancholy tune. it seems blogger has much improved and can handle more types of poetry. so i will share some of my different formats and styles with you. hope you like it.  
Tuesday, July 20, 2004
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2 comments:
wow. love this poem. and the formatting is crucial to it. I see what you mean.
Especially the line with "reach" in it.
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I like this one, too! I like the last two lines of how captured dreams seem to lose their shine.
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